6th-8th Grade
Subjects:
Language Arts, Philanthropy and Social Studies
Key Words/Concepts click to view
| ELA: | Advertising/Marketing; Communicate; Constructing Meaning; Language Style; Writing Process |
| PHIL: | Character Education: Honesty; Honesty |
| SOC: | Common Good |
Purpose:
Students explore ways to be honest in communication, writing with clear purpose and honest intent.
Duration:
One 20-minute class period
Objectives:
The learner will:
- discuss techniques for writing with clear communication.
- write a statement about a community issue in clear, honest language.
- review a peer's statement and give feedback.
Service Experience:
Although this lesson contains a service project example, decisions about service plans and implementation should be made by students, as age appropriate.
This character education mini-lesson is not intended to be a service learning lesson or to meet the K-12 Service-Learning Standards for Quality Practice. The character education units will be most effective when taught in conjunction with a student-designed service project that provides a real world setting in which students can develop and practice good character and leadership skills. For ideas and suggestions for organizing service events go to generationon.org.
Instructional Procedure(s):
Anticipatory Set:
Yesterday we explored making meaning clear using voice and body language. Today we will explore honesty in written communication.
- Ask the students how they can mislead or deceive others when they are writing about an event. Encourage them to think about political advertisements or historical accounts.
- Discuss tactics such as suggestive comments, omission of information, lack of clarity, sarcasm, and fabrication. (For examples, see Attachment One: Honesty in Writing.)
- You may give the example that doctors have a reputation for obfuscation, or using unfamiliar vocabulary when talking to families in order to soften the language about a difficult diagnosis.
- Tell the students that when they communicate, you expect them to be truthful, sincere, and forthright. Tell them that if their intent is to be truthful, they will most likely communicate honestly.
- Give the students a minute to think and then write a statement about an issue related to the common good. The statement should be honest and give clear information. The statement may be about a need in the community (hunger, homelessness, environment, safety, etc.), a political issue, or a school issue.
- After 5 minutes, they read their statement to a neighbor.
- After they share with a partner, have the partners discuss whether the statement felt sincere and honest. Ask for volunteers to share statements with the whole class.
Lesson Developed By:
Betsy Flikkema
Associate Director
Learning to Give
Barbara Dillbeck
Director
Learning to Give
Handouts:
Honesty in Writing
The following comments demonstrate writing that is unclear and dishonest. After each example is a sample of clearer and more honest writing, although the writer may not have all the answers.
Fabrication and lack of clarity:
Homeless people are the biggest problem facing the world today.
More clear and honest:
I saw a homeless woman on the street downtown. She was huddled up against a building with a blanket around her. I was walking with my family to a musical event. We were dressed up and bundled in our warm coats and eager for a fun evening. I noticed that the blanket wrapped around the woman was really bulky and I wondered what was under it. I tried not to stare, but my stomach clenched and I’m sure my mouth dropped when I realized there was a child under the blanket. I wondered if that was where they were sleeping tonight and whether they had anything to eat. We walked the rest of the way in silence as I wondered how big of a problem homelessness was in my own town. I decided I was going to find out more about what I can do.
Omission of information:
During the war, the people were angry and we didn’t know who was responsible so I didn’t do anything about the problem.
More clear and honest:
There are such confusing messages on the news about the war in Iraq. People on both sides of the issue speak angrily about the mistakes we’re making. I don’t know what the right answers are, but I feel bad that both American soldiers and Iraqis are getting killed. I wish the war would end and our soldiers would come home. I haven’t done anything myself because I’m not sure what I can do, but I want to do something. So I’ll start by reading more about the reasons we are there, and then maybe I’ll write a letter.
Suggestive comment:
I’m not saying it was his fault, but we didn’t have that problem before he took office, and now look at all the trouble we’re in.
More clear and honest:
I heard my dad blame the governor for the loss of jobs in our state. He said the governor should have given money to the industries that were in trouble instead of paying for road repairs. I don’t know if my dad is right, but I think it might be more complicated than that.